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Thursday 10 June 2021

Action Shots

 As he bolted towards the horizon, all he needed to do was gain momentum. He was a cheetah, gracefully sprinting towards was to become destiny.

The feeling was something he had never felt before, there was something that had encouraged him to keep on going, something that had chosen his career.

Through the depths of the mountains and sheer will, he had done it. He had finally made it.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Jai! This is such a wonderful description. I liked that you used a complex sentence - As he bolted towards the horizon... Also, the metaphor you used with a cheetah is great!

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